She stared down bravely. She knew what she was doing, rather she had planned this and she would carry on with the plan to the T.
She squeezed her eyes shut and her heart thumped loudly, she could hear her blood ringing in her ears. She sent a silent prayer to the man above, and jumped. Her lithe body, arms gracefully spread like an angel, she crashed into the icy dark waves. Her body tossed & turned like a ragged old mannequin. Her breath came in gasps as the salty water burned her eyes. Her body convulsed and the icy water began to freeze her lungs. She saw herself in kindergarten, performing ballet on the stage. She was 14 and was elected the head of the drama club. Her parents' 50th anniversary. Her first kiss. Her driving license. Her mind started to numb down, she knew it was time to say goodbye. But to whom? Her parents didn't want her. Her sister hated her. And she had no other family.
'Maria, mariaa' she heard someone call.. Alex! Oh sweet Alex, her love, had come to save her. She pictured his perfect luscious lips, his rock hard abs, his yummy cologne, but he'd gone off with Anne...? Ah! He must have seen the error of his ways. Her body was tossed again and she felt the numbness set in to her very bones. Something warm touched her. Another person... She fluttered her eyelashes, trying to fight the exhaustion, she wanted to look into his electrifying blue eyes..one last time. She struggled and squinted, but she was met with a pool of warm chocolate staring back at her with worry,fear and something else too. Love. It was Zayn.
She then realized it had been Zayn all along.
OMG..that was soooo awesome :D
ReplyDeleteI loved loved it.. The ending was brilliant! :D
Thank you :D
DeleteThanks a lot!
<3
wowzers!!!!! :))
ReplyDeleteThank you Crystal! <3
DeleteWoah :D Nice one gal ;) :D.
ReplyDeleteLiked it a lot xD.
I googled Zayn Malik xD Not bad :P xD :P.
I'm glad you liked it :D
DeleteThanks <3
Hahaha, I know right! =D
WOW!!
ReplyDeleteJust WOW! :) :)
Thanks a lot A. :) xx
Deletethis is so cute, fresh and lovely :)
ReplyDeletethe pic reminds me of the notebook :)
I haven't seen it yet!
DeleteAnd thank you so much <3
How do you write so well being so young!!! loved it :)
ReplyDeleteAwwh. Thank you for saying that!
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cool n enjoyable:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot!
Deletewho the earth is zayne? btw good post.
ReplyDeletehmph! am much hotter than him!
*Zayn. =p
DeleteThank you!
awesome great fantastic splendid...aisa nahin kahunga
ReplyDeletesuper..kickass...lovely............aisa main kehna chahtha tha
I don't know who you are :S, but thanks a lot!
Deleteso much of emotions, It's so easy to feel alone in the dark but best thing to do is find that one thing that let you release that fear that pain that hurt and the feeling as if you have no reason to live ..
ReplyDeleteBut sometimes that one thing/one person, are unreachable, y'know what I mean?
DeleteThank you for commenting :]
After a starting glance. I was like OMGGGG! Post has been written over me. :O
ReplyDeleteBut then. *Hreat breaks* You always do so to me. :3
Hahaha =P
DeleteSorry!
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Amazing :D And Zayn mallik is all ive been hearing about lately :p but hes great! must say! and loved the love story as well, the ending makes me go aweee :D
ReplyDeleteThaank you!:D
DeleteHahahaha, yeah, that guy is HOT!
Thank you, I'm glad you loved it ;]
xx
hehehe dats lovely ...
ReplyDeleteThank you! :]
DeleteThis is so beautifully written
ReplyDeleteDescribed amazingly , you've got this amazing talent to get someone hooked on to the entire post.
wow.
xx
Thank you so much!
DeleteHaha, that feels so good, y'know. :D
Thanks a lot for this lovely comment! xx
That really touched me!
ReplyDeleteYou inspire me!
ReplyDeleteYou are just so amazing!!
Everything you do is just so amazing, I just look up to you!!