Saturday, January 7

Alive! 55 Words #1


She felt the salty air lick her face. She felt her spirits rise. She felt the warm breeze beckoning her close, tugging at her skirt. She felt the air whisper into her ears. She inhaled the salivating smell of warm spicy groundnuts.She felt alive,after ages. Then she felt the truck slam into her! 

-THE END - 

6 comments:

  1. yay! first one to comment =P
    she felt alive .. :P
    xx !! nice lines .. :)

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  2. and life moved on,.. unaffected, untouched.. :)

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  3. Woaaahhh!!!Never could have guessed that ending...Awesome..:-)

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  4. Hey! I love doing 55 words. Its awesome :P LOL.

    And this.
    Was mind blowing. Gah. I totally didnt expect that.

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  5. Rv* : Yaaaaay =D Thanks a lot!

    Aakash : Beautiful line, that! =]

    Rahul : :D Thanks!

    Blashphemous Aesthete : Hahaha, exactly =p

    Sonshu : Weeeeee =D Thanks! xo

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