Sunday, August 14

Rakhi Special - Fiction #2

She entered the bus with a unique, or as some would say, a strange mixture of happiness and sorrow with a tinge of,  closure? She sat down in the back, alone. She was armed with a notepad and appeared to be scribbling furiously into it, with her eyes and mind totally in what she was writing, not caring to see around, as many other girls of her age would have.

"Dearest Samir Bhaiyya,
                                        Hiiii !! It's been almost 2 months since I haven't said anything to you. And you might be wondering why I am writing a letter to you when, in a short time, we are going to meet. You know how it is with me and spoken word,no? I want to say a million things but when we finally do meet, I might not be able to speak even a few hundred. So I am penning it all down so that you can know what really is in my mind and heart.
                                   School's been going good. 8th standard was a piece of cake and the whole transition from 8th to 9th standard seems bullcrap to me. I mean what's the big deal about it? We are the same. School is the same. Everything is the same. But you know our school na, always hyping up stuff to scare us which they think is going to result in us studying more. Hahaha,as if! But I digress.....
Ma and Pappa are both fine. They have just recently joined Salsa classes! Yeah, our very own mom, who was so embarrassed to even shake a leg during Ganesh Chaturthi and dad, who thought all this was "nonsense" .. It's weird how time changes people,no? Well anyways they're having a gala time and I'm really happy for them. They've just started going out and become a little more enjoy-till-I-die since the past few weeks. 
                              You know what,bhaiyya,we miss you. I, ma, pappa, even that rude old aunty on the 1st floor who used to keep telling you not to feed the cats blah blah, she too keeps asking about you! Huh :(
                          Well there's nothing much that is left to update you upon. I mean 2 mahine pehle what I'd told you about my music class,friends and all, it's pretty much the same. BTW I was thinking I could really use that old olive green jacket of yours. In the words of the great Maithili, it is "HAWT!" Haha, she really did have a crush on you, that crazy friend of mine. 
                       I guess that's it bro. I love you, soooooo much! And miss you even more. 
                                                                                                          Loads of hugs and kisses, 
                                                                                                                                                    Priya. "

She got down the bus and with an heart breakingly beautiful  smile, walked for about 15 minutes.

"Bhaiyyaaaaaaaa!!! Oh God, you have no clue how much I've missed you!!!" she said with a tear slowly running down.
She laid down the letter among the countless others that she had earlier, places new flowers on his grave, tied a rakhi to one of the flower stems and after whispering "I love you bhaiiyaa" she walked away.

We must strive hard, so hard that the generations to come know the word 'Cancer' as just another zodiac sign.

I hope you brothers really do protect your lovely sisters and I hope all sisters got awesome gifts =D

 Happy Independence Day to Pakistan!! And as Hamza puts it in this post of his here,  "Ao iss saal hum dono apas mei dosti karlein! Ab Larai khatam kro, bus pyaar kro yar " 

Ayushi Di reading my post 'Dark Days' mentioned me in her overflowing with positivity post here. Thank you sooo much Di *tons of hugs* According to me, this is her BEST post! Made me miss him that much more!

Risha Di awarded me here .. Loook! I am there, 7th on the list :"> Thaanku diii ! >:D< This has been her BESTEST post :D. Every single thing written over there made me go "omg that is me. and oh,that too!" Aries Rule \m/

Mehreen picked me Blogger Of The Week here! All those sweet words she used for me :"> Thank you sooo much!! This is her CUTEST post. The cats awwwwwie <3

I was thinking of listing 3 bloggers below every post, in alphabetical order saying why I follow them and listing their fav post according to me. What Say?

Take Care People.
Peace <3


  1. Happy Raksha Bandhan!
    That story was so touching. =(

    I really do wish the next generations come know the word 'Cancer' as just another zodiac sign.

    OMG, you mentioned me in your post=D ♥
    Thank you so much!
    Happy Independence Day to you as well!

    Congrats on the Award! And also on been chosen as the Blogger of the week by Mehreen! ♥

    Yes, you should do the 3 blogger thing! It would help me discover some wonderful Blogs/Bloggers!


  2. And and and I'm really surprised you've started writing such detailed fiction :)
    Let it not be this sad the next time. My heart is heavy :(
    Happy rakhi :) how was yours ? My brothers took me and my sister for a movie and then a nice finger-licking dinner, Couldn't be any better here :)
    Want to see more :)
    Keep writing :)

  3. Aww, that was heart-wrenching :'( Priya and her brother deserved better.

    And Aries-es DO rule, man \m/

  4. Awww cute =D <3

    And cute idea about the listing n stuff =)


    PS Happy Independence Day in Advance =)

  5. Happy Rakhshabandhan and a very happy independence day in advance. :) Loved the post. :)

  6. Aawww, that was so sad. :( I was all aawwwing and making sad faces.

    I liked this one okay?

    And about the listing bloggers, totally! Amaaaazing idea. (:


  7. WOW what a beautiful post <3
    U write magic gal...though the end heartbroke me but I agree I hope 'Cancer' ends as just a Zodiac one day :D

    Totally love ur blog :)
    Following it :)

  8. awwww cute i love the way you write!

  9. The story was sooo touching...but SOME part of it were real in my life!!!

    Anyway..happy raksha bandhan..may happiness be your always :):)

  10. That was a good read dear... and thanks for the link up :) Happy Independence day to you too sweets! <3 :)

  11. @ Hamza : Thanks! :) Yeah,I hope and wish the same too!
    Haha,welcome :D Thank you thank you :"> And yeah,I'll do that now!
    @ Ayushi Di : Mine was awesaaaam :D Thank you!
    @ Priyanka : Yeah,they did :( And yeah, Aries raak \m/
    @ Ridx : Thank you SOO much!!!
    @ Felicity : Thanks!! :D
    @ Sonshu : Thanks thanks thanks :D :D
    @ Scribbling Gal : Aww thanki so much!! Welcome here :)
    @ Rosette Princess : Thaaanku :D !
    @ The Other side of me : Oww :( Thanks for reading!
    @ Mehreen : Thank you! :)

  12. Was this the best thing I've read today? :p
    yes it was!

    It was just AWESOME!!!
    L-O-V-E-D it!!!

  13. Omg *blushes*
    Thank you thank you shoo much Aquib!! :)

  14. It was heart breaking. But a great attempt at writing emotional stuff.

    We must strive hard, so hard that the generations to come know the word 'Cancer' as just another zodiac sign. I wish.

    Best line. Couldnt put it anyway better.

  15. Owww the layout is chANGED IS IT'S JUST COOOL :]

  16. @ Nia : Yeah! Thanks a hell lot! >:D<

    @ Ifra : Eeeee =D yeah! Thanks!!

  17. Wow, u rock!!

    Congrats on so many adulations.. u makin me jealous :)

    Nice read :)

  18. You wanna kill me for I am commenting itni jaldi, haina my Sexy arien sissy! :( Aww, M sorry!
    And seriously girl, you are a rockstar, i loved the story, the theme, the characters, everything! :)
    And the way you appreciated me here, that melt my heart like a choc syrup. Was that lame ;) Lol :D You get the point right!
    Thank you a ton.

    Love and hugs, Risha :)

  19. Really touching post...

    Had read this a few days before, but forgot to comment tabhi. Sorry for that.

  20. Zaphod beeblebrox28 August 2012 at 11:23

    The best piece I read in weeks! No exaggeration!


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